I've been playing with Jara's plot, and this morning I finally pinned down the black moment. I knew it on some level, but today I finally put it into words. Which is going to help because now I know where I'm going... which is going to make it easier to get there. :-)
But I'm mostly caught up with last minute Christmas stuff, so I may not have time to do much with this for a while. We shall see.

